Post by Steve Requin on Dec 2, 2005 15:31:50 GMT -5
There was one page that was supposed to go between this one and the next. This is how it was supposed to go:
IMAGE 1: Oustide. The porch. The policeman talks to the priest. We see the police car parked in front. POLICEMAN: Follow me!
IMAGE 2: Both men get into the police car. They're both silent.
IMAGE 3: Both men inside the car. The priest buckles up. The policeman starts the engine. They're both silent.
IMAGE 4: Both men in the car, as the policeman is driving. They're both silent.
IMAGE 5: Both men in the car, the priests looks at the policeman. They're both silent.
IMAGE 6: Both men in the car. The policemen drives into the mortician's driveway. They're both silent.
IMAGE 7: Both men in the car. The policemen opens his door. POLICEMAN: Come!
IMAGE 8: The policemen goes first, followed by the priest. The policemen sneers at the priest's wise-ass remark. PRIEST: Well, I'm sure glad we had this talk.
The reason why I decided not to use this page was because, at one page a week, and that being page 8, some people complained they've been waiting for action for two months already. So I skipped to the next.
Post by Steve Requin on Dec 2, 2005 15:35:12 GMT -5
The transition from school to the movies was supposed to be smoother, with Jason being physically dragged by Miroku and Alexei into the soirée. But I was limited by the comic book format, which is 22 pages, so I had to give up on parts that were less important to the story.
That last page was the very first one to be drawn and inked. It was a test. That's why the art might seem slightly different from the rest of it.
Post by Steve Requin on Dec 2, 2005 15:35:36 GMT -5
What I tried (and apparently failed) to do with these last 4 panels is show one scenery that continues from one panel to the other. Hence, if the scenery seems to change in each panel, that's just because Jason is going a little further into it each time.